> # Re: Off the Deep End - Page 5

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> Posted by Dolby1000 on January 13, 2014 at 01:06:35

> In Reply to: Re: Off the Deep End - Page 5 posted by Jesse on January 12, 2014 at 14:53:47:

> Will the sister get her birthday party? Will the son start to pay any attention to his sister? Will the mother put aside her project and give her daughter the party she wants? Will the book be finished? Will we see the kids wearing anything else? Why is the Mom in a wet suit and not in clothes herself? Why doesn't the tripod fall down when the mother swims away for a timed picture (it does when I try this). Will anyone buy the book or will it languish on the $1 shelf?

> Yeah, not caring at all! You are doing a great job telling your story. Looking forward to the next chapters. Perhaps the birthday party ends in the pool? Or a bunch of skater friends come over? Who knows? But, I am anxious to find out.

> You are very imaginative and very wise, the best story telling must revolve around the characters, whether it is the great American novel or a graphic based story. If the audience cares about them, then you are telling an interesting tale. Thank you for sharing it.

> Dolby1000

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