> # Re: A soaking good time (fiction)

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> Posted by LevilovR on January 29, 2015 at 21:56:07

> In Reply to: A soaking good time (fiction) posted by andy on January 29, 2015 at 21:19:07:

> I liked it. Well written. My only criticism is that it's short. It's kind of a tease, I want more. I was always taught that every story should have a beginning, middle and end and some sort of conflict. I feel like I got the beginning and the rest is yet to come. Please write more. I hope you develop this story (there are lots of things you could do) and hope you share others you have written as well. Thanks for posting it.

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